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Title: KEEP OUT
Author: sharpes_hussy
Rating: G
Prompt: pariah
Summary: Sheppard thought he must be seeing things...

Sheppard stepped out of the gate and was immediately struck by the similarity
of the landscape with some of the areas he had landed in, albeit briefly, in the Arghandab Valley........void of all life, sucked dry by the winds and the heat and. . Then he was drawn back to the present and the buzzing sound of McKay talking about how 'inhospitable' it all was.......He chuckled pulling
his shades a bit tighter against his nose and moved point; Ronon following close behind and bringing up the rear, Teyla listening attentively to McKay.
Then in the distance he saw it, a large monolith, rising out of the sand. It danced in the distance like it was somehow moving.
Its redness in sharp contrast to the sand and the strange hue of the sky.

Turning to Ronon, who appeared fixated by the sight, Sheppard said, “Let's check it out''. As they approached, it proved to be monstrous. The surface was smooth, but it had areas where there were deep recesses. Caves? Maybe deep caves which lead where?
Rodney?
"No readings. Nothing
"

As they moved closer, it suddenly became clear that the monolith while seeming to be dead, had an aura about it that intrigued Sheppard, but it was also slightly disturbing. It was almost as though there was an invisible wall about it warning
those who approached to KEEP OUT.


Comments

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sherry57
Jul. 3rd, 2011 10:53 am (UTC)
Now you've whetted my appetite to know what would happen if they didn't keep out!!!
black_raven135
Jul. 3rd, 2011 04:36 pm (UTC)
>:-)
stella_pegasi
Jul. 3rd, 2011 04:42 pm (UTC)
Oh...that spidy sense of Sheppard's comes into play again...when will he learn not to follow that instinct! Oh well, if he didn't, things would be as much fun!!!!
black_raven135
Jul. 3rd, 2011 04:54 pm (UTC)
***NODS***
Sheppard is sooooooooooooooooo dependable....
:-D
titan5
Jul. 3rd, 2011 09:22 pm (UTC)
You've done it again. You left me wanting more. Love the visual image of the huge red structure out in the middle of nowhere.
black_raven135
Jul. 4th, 2011 12:21 am (UTC)


Thank you so much.........
It seems that each time they issue a prompt on SGA_Saturday the muse just runs with it......
tridget
Jul. 4th, 2011 01:59 am (UTC)
Due to lack of extra time, I've only just started to peek at some of the SGA Saturday stories. Cool comm. I'm glad you've decided to yield to the muses.

This is an intriguing scenario. I'd like to know more, although I think I can safely bet The team will NOT keep out.

black_raven135
Jul. 4th, 2011 02:21 am (UTC)
NO, there would never be an intriguing whatever that Sheppard would not want to 'inspect'
:D
trillingstar
Jul. 9th, 2011 09:03 pm (UTC)
Caves! Hee! I have a great visual of the Team going spleunking, now ;)

I'm also intrigued by what may be inside... a little 'hands off!' sign has never deterred Sheppard in the past... hehe.
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