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Fic: We Can Name It Later

Title: We Can Name It Later
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Don't own them, just playing.
Prompt: name
WC: 514
Notes: Unbeta'd, just off the cuff. I had this vision of naked John saying one of my favorite lines. If you spot anything egregious, just let me know, I'll fix it.



"Yeah...fuck... god... that's... umf," John's face slides over the rough sheets as he collapses beneath Rodney, boneless and so totally satisfied he doesn't even care that Rodney drives into him a few more times, then grunts out his own climax and crashes, smashing John deeper into the mattress with his weight.

"Oh, my god," Rodney says, though it's muffled because Rodney's mouth is crushed against John's back, and John can only go on what he knows of Rodney to be sure that's anything close to what he said. Rodney turns his head and lays his cheek against John's back. "That was..."

John chuckles. "I know."

"What was that thing you did? with your hips? And, oh, man, you were right about the leverage thing."

John tries to inhale but can't with Rodney's heft still pushing him into the mattress. He settles for a few more shallow breaths, because he actually kind of like having Rodney so close. He feels surrounded and grounded and, if he were able to turn his head, he's sure he'd be able to keep breathing Rodney in. "You should listen to me more often, then, since I have such good ideas."

"What? I listen." Rodney grouses, but it's half-hearted at best, judging by the punctuation of the short, sucking kiss he lays on John's shoulder.

"Mmm," John murmurs. He's still too content to move, but he knows Rodney's just building up for a real conversation, so he lies still, savoring the few minutes in which Rodney is relatively quiet.

"I do," Rodney affirms with another kiss. "When you have something intelligent to say." He shifts a little, lifts his weight to slide off of John's back, and John tries to suppress a disappointed groan. Rodney will be impossible to live with if he susses out that John actually likes it when they cuddle like this. Rodney dashes his hopes when he says, "I heard that." Then he runs his fingers through John's hair, and, giving in to the temptation, trusting Rodney with this vulnerability, John pushes into the caress before turning to face Rodney.

"I like it when you're all over me," he whispers.

Rodney smiles, the knowing look that John knows can turn smug enters his eyes, but he doesn't say anything. It's like he knows the moment is fragile, and for once lets it be. His eyes roam over John's face. "I do, too, " he says, "but I like you nice and flush with oxygen, not blue from the lack of it because I weigh a ton and am crushing you."

They're quiet a moment, just the sound of their breathing heavy in the air. John's watching Rodney, watching for the moment when that big brain of his goes into gear. Rodney's brows turn down in a quick frown and he says to John, "Seriously, though. That thing you did, with the hips?"

John quirks an eyebrow, silent, waiting.

"I think I'm going to call it, 'the flyboy grind."

"Oh, jeez, Rodney," John moans, turning his face back into the mattress, exasperated. "We can name it later."

Comments

( 43 comments — Leave a comment )
annieb1955
Sep. 15th, 2012 07:38 pm (UTC)
FB for We Can Name It later
So sweet. I love cuddle!fic and that line of John's is perfect.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 15th, 2012 09:11 pm (UTC)
Re: FB for We Can Name It later
I, too, love cuddle fics. Who says they have to have plots?!?!?
melagan
Sep. 15th, 2012 08:03 pm (UTC)
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
altyronsmaker
Sep. 15th, 2012 09:11 pm (UTC)
Aww, thanks! :D I like eliciting the EEEEEEEs and ♥'s
goddess47
Sep. 15th, 2012 08:47 pm (UTC)
the flyboy grind

::giggle-snort::
altyronsmaker
Sep. 15th, 2012 09:10 pm (UTC)
I thought, 'what is the absolute worst thing you can come up with, here, Chelle?' and that is what came out. flyboy grind. God. It's horrible. I winced. So of course, John is just... *shakes head* Good thing he loves Rodney so much!
mab_browne
Sep. 15th, 2012 10:24 pm (UTC)
That was really sweet in a J/R sort of way. :-)
altyronsmaker
Sep. 15th, 2012 11:20 pm (UTC)
I'll take that a a compliment ;)Thanks for reading. :D
trillingstar
Sep. 15th, 2012 11:01 pm (UTC)
I like it when Rodney's all over John too. :)

LOL @ the flyboy grind. Yes, name it later!! *g*
altyronsmaker
Sep. 15th, 2012 11:19 pm (UTC)
Yeah. That's a horrible name for something that must have been really freakin' awesome. heheh. Glad you liked, and yeah, Rodney laying all over John just...well... hits my kinks, man. ;)
danceswithgary
Sep. 16th, 2012 12:48 am (UTC)
Cute! :-D
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:43 am (UTC)
thank you! :D
esteefee
Sep. 16th, 2012 12:48 am (UTC)
aw, jeez ::melty::

the flyboy grind! har!

this was hot and sweet, thank you for sharing!
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:46 am (UTC)
yay! melty? whoot. Glad you liked it! And Rodney really sucks at naming things (mostly because *I* suck at naming things, har!).
aadarshinah
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:08 am (UTC)
that is a truely terrible name, but a lovely story.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:47 am (UTC)
I know, totally terrible name. But that's Rodney thing. Good thing John still loves him. hahah! Thanks for reading. :)
aadarshinah
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:48 am (UTC)
please tell me you had to work to think of a name that bad. otherwise I don't know if I'll ever be able to respect you again.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:54 am (UTC)
well. I hate to admit it, but I totally suck at naming things. That was my third choice, though. So I hope you can still respect me. *meep*
aadarshinah
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:57 am (UTC)
hmmm... maybe. ::looks suspiciously at screen:: but I'll be keeping an eye on your naming capailities from here on out and reserving my final judgement for later.
popkin16
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:27 am (UTC)
loool Poor John - surrounded by people that should not be naming things.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:48 am (UTC)
Right? Ford, Rodney. Clearly the only person on Atlantis who should be naming things is John. haha! Thanks for reading. :D
popkin16
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:52 am (UTC)
At least, according to John nobody but him should be naming things :D You're very welcome!
panisdead
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:30 am (UTC)
AWWW. That's really sweet. :)
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 01:48 am (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D
hoktauri
Sep. 16th, 2012 04:06 am (UTC)
Hee hee! OMG I love this! It's so warm and sweet, and what a great punchline! Both intimate and humourous--kudos! :D
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 05:03 am (UTC)
That's how I like to think of the guys: warm and sweet, with a dash of humor. OH, yeah, and naked. and sweaty. *winkwinknudgenudge* Glad you liked it!
blackchaps
Sep. 16th, 2012 04:34 am (UTC)
I like it alot! Good thinking, Rodney!
altyronsmaker
Sep. 16th, 2012 05:04 am (UTC)
LOL, John (and, incidentally, myself) thinks it's a ridiculous name. Thanks for reading and the comment. Glad you liked it. :D
fanficfan123
Sep. 16th, 2012 06:34 am (UTC)
Lots of intimacy here--physical, emotional, and verbal.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D Glad you liked it.
fanficfan123
Sep. 19th, 2012 05:23 am (UTC)
You're welcome.
runpunkrun
Sep. 16th, 2012 07:09 pm (UTC)
Love this. It's so, like, sweaty and intimate.
altyronsmaker
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:53 am (UTC)
Sweaty and intimate is what I was going for, and a little bit of funny, as well. Thank you for reading and commenting. :D
mific
Sep. 17th, 2012 12:47 pm (UTC)
"the flyboy grind" - heh. Very nice!
altyronsmaker
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:54 am (UTC)
It's a terrible appellation for the beauty that is John's slinky hips and their tendency to do whatever they want! haha! Glad you liked. thank you for reading and commenting. :D
duonoaikouka
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:10 am (UTC)
A very nice balance of sweet, laugh-out-loud funny, and pure J/R. You captured them perfectly in all their sweaty goodness. :)
altyronsmaker
Sep. 19th, 2012 02:55 am (UTC)
So glad this worked for you and that you caught the sweet and funny. That, to me, is quintessential J/R. Thanks for reading and commenting. :D
outsideth3box
Sep. 20th, 2012 06:13 am (UTC)
Love me some sweet, snuggly boys!

Thanks for sharing!
altyronsmaker
Sep. 22nd, 2012 11:15 pm (UTC)
I love the cuddly, too. Thanks for reading! :D
saffronhouse
Sep. 24th, 2012 11:36 pm (UTC)
Joy!
altyronsmaker
Sep. 25th, 2012 03:37 am (UTC)
Gratitude! :D
ozsaur
Sep. 26th, 2012 04:07 am (UTC)
Awww, made me smile!
squidgiepdx
Dec. 2nd, 2012 11:43 am (UTC)
Flyboy Grind
That was hot and very sweet!
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