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Week #64: Desire to Touch (PG)

Title: Desire to Touch
Author: goddess47
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Words: 100 x 3
Summary: Small tears lead to big revelations.


For sga_saturday week 64: tear








It was a small tear in Rodney's BDUs, but... skin showed through. Pale skin, smooth and soft looking.

John couldn't keep his eyes away. He should be watching where he was walking, in fact he had stumbled once and Teyla had shot him a sharp look. He forced himself to look at the path in front of them.

John stumbled again when he realized that the tear was on the seat of the pants... the evidence of skin meant that Rodney wasn't wearing any underwear.

John bit back a groan and through sheer willpower, willed down the erection that flared.



When they finally took a break, Rodney sat down on a log but quickly stood up. "Fuck, didn't think I had torn anything in that fall." He dusted off his ass and lay a handkerchief down before he sat again. Gingerly, so he didn't make it any worse.

Rodney looked up at John and was startled by the hunger in his eyes. Right. John had been walking behind him and had noticed. Interesting.

Rodney shot John a triumphant grin. Rodney had been looking at John for a long time, this was the first time he had caught John looking back.



Rodney all but dragged John to his room, once they got back.

"I saw you looking," Rodney said gently. Moving closer, he gave John room to move away if he wanted. John didn't move.

"You... it's... I...." John swallowed and then nodded. He didn't look away from Rodney's eyes.

"Eloquent," Rodney teased with a small smile. He closed the distance between them. "Maybe we can make actions speak louder than words."

John groaned at the trite statement, then moaned when Rodney finally touched him.

All of Rodney was pale and smooth. And it was as soft as John had imagined.

Comments

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ldyanne
Aug. 18th, 2012 06:54 pm (UTC)
Oh, very nice! I love how Rodney knows John so well with:

"Eloquent," Rodney teased with a small smile. He closed the distance between them. "Maybe we can make actions speak louder than words."

*happy sigh*
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:27 am (UTC)
Rodney does know John well!

Many thanks!
tarlanx
Aug. 18th, 2012 07:21 pm (UTC)
Very, very nice :D
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:28 am (UTC)
::grin::

Thanks!
esteefee
Aug. 18th, 2012 08:33 pm (UTC)
Eloquent, yes. :)))
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:28 am (UTC)
John does have a certain way with words! ;-)

Thanks!
danceswithgary
Aug. 18th, 2012 08:56 pm (UTC)
Yummy! :-D
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:29 am (UTC)
They are, aren't they?

Thanks!
altyronsmaker
Aug. 18th, 2012 10:22 pm (UTC)
momma like.

Rodney's got a tear in his britches and it's makin' John a bit, um, anxious, if you know what I mean.

:D
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:29 am (UTC)
Oh, yeah... John's anxious! ;-)

Thanks!
melagan
Aug. 18th, 2012 10:29 pm (UTC)
Quite, quite yummy m'dear.
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:30 am (UTC)
::grin::

Thanks!
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goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:31 am (UTC)
::blushes::

High praise, indeed! So glad you liked this!
mezzo_cammin
Aug. 18th, 2012 11:52 pm (UTC)
All of Rodney was pale and smooth.

And doesn't that just spur the imagination? Yummmmm.

I like the use of the drabbles - very nicely done!
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 12:31 am (UTC)
It is a pretty thought, isn't it!

Thanks!
popkin16
Aug. 19th, 2012 08:51 am (UTC)
Mmm. I bet Rodney is pale and soft all over. Well, soft all over but in one noticeable place, I should say. Nn.
goddess47
Aug. 19th, 2012 05:49 pm (UTC)
Oh, yes... firm in all the right places! ;-)

Thanks!
spikespet7
Aug. 19th, 2012 08:47 pm (UTC)
Oh sigh........about time boys!


Kimber
goddess47
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:17 pm (UTC)
They are so oblivious!

Thanks!
neevebrody
Aug. 20th, 2012 03:05 am (UTC)
John is very eloquent... in his own way. ;) And I love a Rodney who wises up quick and then gets with the program. I suspect John does, too.

Very nice and I loved the choice of drabble form.
goddess47
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:18 pm (UTC)
I like the drabble form occasionally since it makes me think about what I'm doing...

Thanks!
selenic76
Aug. 20th, 2012 05:24 am (UTC)
Wonderful work, love the drabble form, and the idea that a small piece of skin can have such an intense effect.

Wasn't this just the perfect, most delicious thing to start my Monday with, I'll be thinking of pale, smooth Rodney all day thru work ;)
goddess47
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:18 pm (UTC)
Perfect way to start a Monday!

And the same thought helps when it's not a good Monday! ;-)

Thanks!
wanted_a_pony
Aug. 20th, 2012 12:58 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmmm! John's not the only one who'll spend the day distracted by the thought of pale, smooth skin....

This is lovely & flirty; thanks for writing & sharing with us!
goddess47
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:19 pm (UTC)
It sure is a distraction... but a lovely one!

Thanks!
fanficfan123
Aug. 20th, 2012 06:43 pm (UTC)
Very nice indeed.
goddess47
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:19 pm (UTC)
Awww.... thanks!
fanficfan123
Aug. 21st, 2012 05:22 am (UTC)
You're very welcome.
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